Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Writing The News Article


Car Accident Captures The Lives of Two.

Early on a rainy Monday morning, Mr. and Mrs. Krumpit were driving to work on the Trans Canada Highway, when Mr. Krumpit lost control of the vehicle, and landed upside down in the ditch just a few feet from the road, ending the lives of the couple.

Police were immediately called to the scene, along with the local fire department to try and rescue the couple before it was too late. They were able to free the couple, and both were sent to the hospital for further treatment and surgury.

Unfortunately, the doctors could not save their lives, and were pronounced dead an hour after the accident occurred.

The head of the Police force; Constable Donuts, said that,"Rain was defenitly a factor, there was a lot of water on the roads, and it was very difficult to see." Reporters also asked Doctor Lungly to commented on the couples condition, he stated, "Mr. and Mrs. Krunpit were severely hurt. Mr. Krumpit had a lot of brain damage and internal bleeding, while we believe that Mrs. Krumpit died instantly. My team and I did everything we were able to do, but sometimes it just isn't enough. Our thoughts and prayers are with the family and friends."

The wake will be held Wednesday night from 7-9 P.M and Thursday from 2-4 and 7-9 P.M. Also, the funeral will be held Friday morning at 11:00 A.M at Saint Rapheal's Catholic Church.

Thursday, September 23, 2010

Who, What, When, Where, and Why?

"Virginia set to execute woman"
Theresa Lewis is scheduled to be executed today, September 23, 2010 at 9 P.M ET, at the Greensville Correctional Center in Jaratt for hiring people to kill her husband and stepson. I feel that this lead is effective, because when humans see or hear the word "death", they automatically want to get all the details. The European Unions's embassador to the U.S wrote that they "consider that the execution of people with mental disorders of all types is contrary to minimum standards of human rights." The most interesting information that was told first was, that Lewis would be the first woman to be executed in nearly a century. I feel that the story has a good ending for the people of virginia, because by executing Lewis, the Police, and other officials are doing their job to ensure that they keep their town safe.

"Police identify man swept to sea during Hurricane Igor"
The Police in Newfoundland have identified an 80 year-old man who was taken by a torrent of water during Hurrican Igor. Allan Duffet was swept away on Tuesday, and was lost in a "waterway near Britannia on Random Island, about 100 kilometres northwest of St. John's." I feel that the lead is effective, because of the words "swept to sea" and "Hurricane Igor". These words caught my attention, because this tragedy has caused a lot of damage to people who live in provinces near us. "Sergeant Boyd Merrill says it remains unclear how far Mr. Duffett was carried downstream because searchers have yet to find his body." The most important information was told first, which was, "Police in Newfoundland have identified the 80-year-old man swept away in a torrent of water during Hurricane Igor." The story does not have a good ending, because they Police have still yet to find the missing man's body.

"Is a virus making us fat?"
This week, Researchers at the University of California, San Diego, found that children exposed to a virus called adenovirus-36 or AD36, were more likely to be obese than other children who were not exposed. There are many adenoviruses, but AD36appears to be unique in being able to infect precursors of fat cells. "Lab tests have revealed the virus can hasten the development of these cells and increase their ability to store fat." Even though the most important information is not told first, I think the lead is effective, because obesity is a growing problem in our province, considering that New Brunswick has the largest obesity percentage in Canada. Dr. Schwimmer says that,"there are lots of reasons for people to put on weight. This virus is one more factor. So I think this could be a cause or a contributor – not that it is the cause." This story has a good ending, because it is making more and more people aware of what can cause obesity and that it is a huge problem these days.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Letter of Application For: Web and Layout Designer

September 21, 2010

Mr. Allan Carter
Blackville School
Blackville, NB

Re: APPLICATION FOR WEB AND LAYOUT DESIGNER

Dear Mr. Carter:

I am interested in applying for the job of web and layout designer for The Talon.

As a high school student, I have developed organization skills and creativity, for example, I have been part of our student council as a class representative for the past 2 years, which requires creativity in finding ideas for games, dances, and activities during lunch. I have learned to be very thorough and organized from being Graduation Class Executive, because when planning events, and handling money, you have to keep things together and on track.

I would be honored to be a part of The Talon staff! If you have any questions, contact me at a time that it best for you.

Sincerely,
Michelle J

Michelle J
Blackville, NB

Letter of Application For: Yearbook Editor

September 21, 2010

Mr. Allan Carter
Blackville School
Blackville, NB

Re: APPLICATION FOR YEARBOOK EDITOR

Dear Mr. Carter:

I am interested in applying for the position of yearbook editor for the 2010-2011 year.

As a high school student, I have developed skills that would be very useful in this position such as, experience in editing magazines for my church, and bulletins that are sent out every Sunday. I am also very understanding, organized, and can work well with others. I can also take critism very well. This year, I have been honored to be our Graduation Class's Executive. This job requires much patience, organization, cooperation, effort, and time, which is why I would be perfect for this positon. I am a reliable and trustworthy student, so you can count on me to make sure that my job, along with the other yearbook staff's jobs are done. I understand that being yearbook editor takes a lot of time and effort, which is why I am more than willing to put forth my spartime, flex periods, and doing work at home to ensure that this years's yearbook is one to remember!

I would enjoy being a part of this years yearbook staff. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me at your conveinience.

Sincerly,
Michelle J

Michelle J
Blackville, NB

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Entry #1: The First Newspapers

There are many obvious differences bewtween our newspapers today, and the way they were years ago. For example, years ago, the newspapers did not have many pictures, today, mostly each article has a picture to go along with the write-up. If the old newspapers did have a picture though, it was black and white, today, our pictures are in color.
Many newspapers today are critical and still continue to publish, because years ago, government or expressing your opinion did not seem to be as popular, for example, women were not even allowed to vote until later on. Also, if people had a problem with someone or something, they did not just write it down; they turned to violence. Today, people have the right to express their feelings and thoughts, and if they have a problem, writing it down takes some of the anger away.
When I learned that the first Canadian newspaper was published in Halifax, I was not at all surprised, because Halifax played a big role in our country years ago. For example, when the Titanic sunk, the surviving people were sent to Halifax for care, and the not so fortunate people were buried right in the city of Halifax. Also, many people from over seas, and across the world migrated to Halifax long ago.